I think you're being to pestimistic there. It was clean and presented well and you seemed to achieve your assignment quite well.
I was expecting all the reviews to be like the first one. Its nice to see the newgrounds audience has matured for the most part. Thank you for the review.
Loved the overall concept, well polished, unique and solid visuals but the killer was really the sound, it really drew me in.
Oh My God...
This is by far the most incredible Flash submission I've seen. It's ground breaking and far beyond most Flash animations! I love it and this is coming from someone who rarely votes a five here.
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